Before start you must confirm that you are older than 18 years old. It's a minor convention. Above the "start help to a little girl" button, there is a checkbox: "I'm 18+ and ready see the game content"
for a first game ... not bad. But for me, it's just the squeletton of the game.
you allow the player to chose how to affect the girl, you gave some text about what you do bye investing point. that could be great for those with imagination.
However, it lacks the emotion and the visual. perhaps you now that phrase : "show don't tell". this is the main problem.
perhaps if you add scenes to the game, even short, each time you purchase an ameliotation (or at the start, and the end of each section), we could enjoy the grocess even more (better if we can fill her emotion and have better visual for some stuff like lactation).
also, this is personnal, but I'm not fan of slutty mind control. I'm in the "worse than death" team when it comes to it. (at least, its optionnal here)
Just one last point, from stream to porn, the timer is buggy and the option never came back.
In sumary, not a bad game, but you can still polish it.
nice i like the way eveything turned out. only bugs i've noticed were the timers needed for streaming, photo/post and everything else are definitely inaccurate. half of the things that on 1-3 min timers arent correct and are way longer. some of them im not sure even work after first use. trying not to accidentally spoil the progress to others yet but i like this.
any changes i guess i could mention is include an image of the character while implimenting the upgrades so we can see it in real time what it was to the current. maybe more clothing options maybe more post game after the final transformation. there is a lot of potential so you did great on this and look forward to more and other games
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I can't play game, when i click on "start help to a little girl", the game refreshes itself and i can't progress
Above the "start help to a little girl" button, there is a checkbox: "I'm 18+ and ready see the game content"
for a first game ... not bad. But for me, it's just the squeletton of the game.
you allow the player to chose how to affect the girl, you gave some text about what you do bye investing point. that could be great for those with imagination.
However, it lacks the emotion and the visual. perhaps you now that phrase : "show don't tell". this is the main problem.
perhaps if you add scenes to the game, even short, each time you purchase an ameliotation (or at the start, and the end of each section), we could enjoy the grocess even more (better if we can fill her emotion and have better visual for some stuff like lactation).
also, this is personnal, but I'm not fan of slutty mind control. I'm in the "worse than death" team when it comes to it. (at least, its optionnal here)
Just one last point, from stream to porn, the timer is buggy and the option never came back.
In sumary, not a bad game, but you can still polish it.
nice i like the way eveything turned out.
only bugs i've noticed were the timers needed for streaming, photo/post and everything else are definitely inaccurate. half of the things that on 1-3 min timers arent correct and are way longer. some of them im not sure even work after first use. trying not to accidentally spoil the progress to others yet but i like this.
any changes i guess i could mention is include an image of the character while implimenting the upgrades so we can see it in real time what it was to the current.
maybe more clothing options
maybe more post game after the final transformation. there is a lot of potential so you did great on this and look forward to more and other games
Do you post anything on social media? I’d like to follow your work.
Thanks for your hard work; I honestly expected her to be wearing less clothing in the penultimate and final stages, but this is good too.
I like it